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SELLING
YOUR SYNOPSIS
By
Julie Rowe
I love to write a synopsis!
Actually, that’s a lie. I don’t. I don’t
know anyone who does because synopses are hard. Everyone
agrees on that point, there is little agreement, however, on how
best to write one. There are several
techniques one can use to write a synopsis. Goal, motivation and
conflict, and scene and sequel are two
examples. Whatever method you use, don’t forget the bottom line,
why you’re writing the tooth-pulling
thing in the first place. The synopsis is a selling tool.
It’s
not a summary or an outline, abstract, abridgment, compendium, epitome,
syllabus or
conspectus. The synopsis is a selling tool and therefore needs
to accomplish something different than just
list what happens in your book. It has to engage the interest of
the agent or editor who reads it, provide
enough information on what’s going on and describe the characters
just enough to make that editor or agent
want to read your whole book.
So,
if you look at the synopsis from the perspective of a sales device,
forget your plot outline and
start with your hook. Thrust us directly into your story. Tell
us why we should care about your hero and
heroine. Use strong verbs, descriptive nouns and keep it short.
Craft
the framework of your synopsis around the romance. A synopsis of
a romance novel must sell
the romance. Describe the high points. The initial contact,
sexual tension, first kiss, when the H/h realize
they’re in love, first love scene, the black moment (when their
happy ending seems impossible) and the
happy ending.
Flesh
it out by adding the conflict. What keeps your H/h apart on an internal
level? Why, despite
their undeniable attraction to each other, can’t they get together?
How does this internal conflict get
worse? Tie it in to the black moment. How do the hero and
heroine grow to resolve the internal conflict
and attain their happy ending? Now add a few tid-bits about
the external conflict as briefly as possible.
Sold.
©Julie
Rowe 2004